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  • Grace Woods
    April 25, 2022 at 8:51 pm

    This is so awesome!! Your descriptions were short yet vivid, and I could see it happening in my head while I read! That, combined with the quick dialogue, gave the story a break-neck pace that keeps the reader running with the old man and his little friend.
    One tiny suggestion: Nolan asks if they have to sleep out there, and the old man responds: “have any better option?” I think the grammar might be a bit off; maybe “have a better option?” instead? Other than that, you did really good!

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