• Grace Woods
    June 2, 2022 at 11:36 am

    Melissa, this is AWESOME!!! Your characters have great personalities, and the battle with the tornado was vivid, intense, and very suspenseful! Your details about the tornado added to the realism of the story, meanwhile giving enough explanations so that someone who knows nothing about tornados (me!) could understand what was going on! The byplay between characters was also great; my favorite line was the “What were you thinking?” “I wasn’t!” 😂

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